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Itachi (T) 2006/11/30 11:15 Karma: 2  
Title: Itachi
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Chapter 1: Apocolypta

The mind. Such an interesting concept on how the most powerful organ works. It generates nervous patterns controlling our whole body, it's feelings and actions. What your average psychologist doesn't know and what I do, is that these mind-patterns are shaped in multiple trigrams.

How are these trigrams formed? One concept would represent a point, illustrating a line from one point to the other; which would represent a pattern. One other point would represent an equilibrium joining to the two conceptical points to form a trigram; interesting, no?

However, the mind isn't everything. We all have to put a conditional impact physically; our mind would direct and guide us along the way to our destination desired; decided out with our emotions. Yes, that already forms a trigram. 2 joining points would represent the line of the relation of physics and mentality; whereas it's equilibrium would be emotion.

If we were to count the trigrams accessible to the human mind and draw a regular-sized full stop with a pencil to represent a trigram; we would evaluate to over one trillion kilometers of full stops.

An intelligent prodigy such as myself should know all this; studying how to utilize the mind to its highest level and at the same time; find its greatest weakness. It takes one to know one, am I correct? Coherently, I have all the knowledge; to give me a right, to search for power. I will take over the world with the Sharingan developed with powerful forces of trigrams circulating around my mind each chaining to eachother to form larger, more useful trigrams. I shall use my strength and intellect to control and motivate all to my whim.

The Apocolypta, or the finite trigram; I shall find you.

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Lookie here, a Naruto theme. This'll get you excited. Just making a much more cooler background to Itachi; give your comments/criticism.

Post edited by: True_Chindo, at: 2006/12/15 14:26
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Re:Itachi 2006/11/30 11:42 Karma: 2  
Chapter 2: Le Saga

Shurikens clashed against eachother; each with its own familiar, sour taste of flesh and blood. However, none of it was Itachi's. Itachi fought with both Genjutsu and Juijutsu; and enclosed his futile opponent; mentally. Yes, I did say mentally. The opponent was trapped in a whole different trigramic world; under Itachi's whim; The Tsukuyomi. Itachi possessed the foe's brain with a few strikes and decreased his nervous system to nil; stopping his heart and ending his life leaving his opponent with deadly, gorey, eternal visions.

"Another death. Another collected soul. Another picometer closer to the Apocolypta" muttered Itachi as a voice stopped by and interested his ears which would lead Itachi to a dangerous trap.

"Uchiha, do not play games with me. I shall put the Apocolypta to my full consumption and control; no soul could stop me. Not even... a change of emotions..." said Itachi out loud to blank space.

The voice decided itself to move closer as Itachi felt it's presence with his super-sensitive accurate instict; his hair stood up. Was he afraid? or was it just another unpredictable mind game Itachi decided to role-play. The voice then revealed a full illustration to be accessed with the naked eye. Itachi then decided to reveal something as well; his sour taste for revenge and anger. The illustration then let out another revealing; it's smell. Itachi could fully sense it now, it was the Mangekyou!

The Mangekyou had an appearance exactly like Itachi as it desired to have a bout till the end. What? would it all end in the second chapter; or is it just a new beginning. Hopefully the latter, we will find out soon on Chapter 3.
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Re:Itachi 2006/12/02 04:25 Karma: 9  
Wow, thanks for posting in this section. No one pays the slightest attention to it. =]

Interesting. Your first post I had to read a few times, but interesting!
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Re:Itachi 2006/12/02 05:08 Karma: 2  
Thanks for the compliments DinoGrawr

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Chapter 3.1: MangekyouBATOU!

The Mangekyou and Itachi eered for a fight, as without hesitation; their trigramic blades clashed. They both stood on their respective places; each intensely using their minds to outdo the respective opponents.

Itachi then went physical, as he grabbed Mangekyou's sleeve and used his strong legs; aiming for a high-knee uppercut. This was one of Itachi's most effective Taijutsu skills; as it provided high impact to the skull.

Problem was, Mangekyou didn't have a skull; it merely changed it's form to a black irregular shape and jolted towards Itachi as it were to reach out and come inside him.

Before the Mangekyou got any closer...
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Re:Itachi 2006/12/02 09:08 Karma: 7  
Oh yay~ Someone else posted a story too! *is so proud*
Total karma points as promised
lol~ Chapter 1 was so overwhelming XD So many vocabulary
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Re:Itachi 2006/12/15 14:27 Karma: 2  
Chapter 3.2: A Sacrifice

"Mangekyou! Return!" shouted a voice.

Indeed the Mangekyou did as what the voice commanded, it headed to its direction. The source of the voice came from a boy as Itachi couldn't certain who he was; as he was standing from a distance.

"No more games. I and the rest of the Uchiha clan; want you dead" said the boy; obviously being Itachi's sibling; Uchiha Sasuke.

Itachi knew the obvious as he could only lean down to a degree and smile and at the same time; keep his cool.

"Revenge. You have indeed chosen a foolish path. Why? You seek satisfaction by attaining power into defeating someone such as myself, without attaining knowledge. Those who seek power over knowledge are foolish; as I can obviously see, you have chosen an illogical and claimingly wrong path. I already gave you options, just cling onto life and be afraid, that's the best choice. You're just like any other human I've met; foolish. Heh; foolish little brother" lectured Itachi without even readying a stance.

"Right or wrong. This is my only purpose in life" was Sasuke's quick reply as he headed towards Itachi unsheathing out a long katana from his left side. The katana had a blue aura around it, similar to that of the Rakiri/Chidori. Itachi immediately knew the source of the aura as it was only a few millimeters in front of his left eye.

With quick thinking, Itachi cupped his hands securing the sword to his control; trying to push it further away from his face. Itachi was still much stronger than Sasuke as he pushed him back with ease and Sasuke fell a few metres back along with his katana.

"The Mangekyou? A sword holding the energy to that of the Chidori? My my, have you improved. But I, have also improved." said Itachi.

"Hmph. I don't need your comments. I have found an energy stronger than that of Orochimaru's. With it, I have established in controlling the chakra, storing it into objects; like this katana. Other than that, I will kill you with one move, regardless of what happens next!" quickly replied Sasuke as he casted a move with his hands.

Sasuke then revolved in circles and after a few quick thousand revolutions, he controlled the wind with his chakra and formed a chidori-tornado (or whatever you would want to call it). The tornado became stronger and larger as Itachi was pulled closer to the tornado. With such force, will Itachi survive?
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